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Special Delivery Author: sunniedays
(Added on Feb 20, 2007) (This month 10969 readers) (Total 23249 readers)
A different kind of birthday-gram. But make sure to read the instructions!

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: Curtis (Edit) Rating: Feb 23, 2007
I agree with the first two reviewers. Good, a little confusing, needs codes. I can't really evaluate H_Dean's comments because in my browser this is another of the stories that got butchered as it was transfered to HTML. I do understand the ending, but I'm not sure it was a good choice. I thought it was a borderline 6/7, but decided to go up this time. (7/10)

Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: Feb 21, 2007
A good story, overall. Unfortunately, the manner in which the story was written was not conducive to a good read. Technically, the mistakes were astoundingly frequent; run on sentences were terribly abundant. This, more than anything, brought about my low review score. In short, it made a solid story ordinary and annoying to read.
Fix those technical mistakes and this story is a solid "7". (4/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Feb 20, 2007
It wasn't a poorly written story, just confusing. Some story codes might have helped! (7/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Feb 20, 2007
the story was good but you need codes so readers can decide before read the story if it is there type story, and a bit more detailed storyline would have been nice as well (6/10)

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