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Escape challenge: the snowy ladder Author: Aurélie Catena & Jennie Costa
(Added on Jan 27, 2011) (This month 15444 readers) (Total 19791 readers)
A girl is challenged to escape from a strict bondage predicament, where she is chained to a metal ladder outside in the snow.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
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Reviewer: gkp00co (Edit) Rating: Jul 30, 2016
My only gripe was the changing POV from 1st to 2nd person. Back and forth several times. Yeah, I was warned in the Introduction, but it's easy to fix. Please, pick a POV and stick with it.
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Apart from that, a good read, and better quality than most.
A bit surprised that you/she was allowed a thong when stripped of everything else, even socks... (8/10)

Reviewer: Yamato (Edit) Rating: Feb 28, 2011
Very very well written. I could feel the cold and desparation and was surprised at how you unlocked the ankles locks! Very creative. (9/10)

Reviewer: raptor9458 (Edit) Rating: Feb 19, 2011
Very well written. Great story. (9/10)

Reviewer: Curtis (Edit) Rating: Feb 3, 2011
Been awhile since I've seen you do one of these. I would think it a limited genre, but you exploit it well. The only reason it wasn't an '8' was the repeated switching of first to second person at the beginning. Yes, you warned us about it, but it was still a mess. You need to do something to set apart the changes. My choice is usually a change in font, but that isn't handled well by the Library's translation software. (7/10)
Replied by: Aurelie.Catena (Edit) (Feb 4, 2011)
Thanks for the comment.
Indeed, in a previous text, i used different fonts but it had been totally messed by the Library and the results were even more confusing...
Actually, the original text has different fonts and I had to uniformise it before posting it.

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