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The Long Walk
Author: Sunni McKay
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(Added on May 30, 2011)
(This month 11907 readers) (Total 14220 readers) |
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A Master tests His future slave with the longest walk of her life. Can she pass all of His tests? |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Eponine
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Jun 21, 2011 |
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Great story, Sunni.
You portray a dominant man who does not sacrifice control for tenderness, nor tenderness for control; he balances both masterfully.
i enjoyed your opening description of the setting; it immediately created a mood of sensuality and arousal, heightened, yet still dormant.
The story's erotic momentum builds smoothly to a well-depicted climax, after which, the clever anti-climax serves nicely to soothe the throbbing pulse of story and reader alike.
Thank you, Sunni! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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enjoyed that. I could almost feel the heat of him pulsing down her throat.
hope you write some more. (7/10)
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