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I want you to hang me
Author: john fitzbe
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(Added on Jan 23, 2015)
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A woman gives up control of her hanging fantasy |
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| Reviewer:
wormdamour
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Mar 29, 2015 |
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I really, really enjoyed it, and I would love to see more from the author! I love the style, and the minimalist dialogue, reminds me of Palahniuk... I would also like to hear more about what happened after she was hoisted back up for the last time. (10/10)
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abbeynj90
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Mar 6, 2015 |
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i enjoyed it (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jrockitt
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Feb 21, 2015 |
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Normally, mistakes in spelling, grammar, etc. will kill my enthusiasm for a story. This one kept me spellbound, with simple suspense devices, and I wanted every last detail of that girl's last party. It worked for me. (9/10)
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ReddyforMore
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Feb 2, 2015 |
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VERY cute. However, I think "handy cap" and "handicap" would mean two very different things. And I'm guessing you MEANT to write "handicap," and I'm guessing that wearing a "handy cap" would have no effect on how well a stripper performs :)
Also, it's entirely up to you, and leaving the rest up to your readers' imaginations is certainly one way to go. A description of the next few minutes (from both points of view) might be pretty interesting, as well, however. And as the cameras are set up to record for 8 hours, perhaps repeated hangings ALMOST to completion, followed by recovery periods, would be fun (for the sadist).
Anyway, as it stands it's a pretty cute little story, with just that one misuse of wording. (9/10)
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