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Jane Randolph
Author: saltyone
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(Added on Sep 21, 2000)
(This month 67154 readers) (Total 101940 readers) |
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Jane Randolph was run into a drug dealer's territory. They captured her and kept her as a label, then she was sold as a slave girl. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 16, 2009 |
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Very well written, enticing story. Loved the ending too.
A pity saltyone never posted anything else.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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WOW, enough said ?? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Joe Stalin |
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Feb 16, 2001 |
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The author should definitly write/upload more stories. Very well written. Kind of short, but too short is better than too long. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
hermit |
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Dec 19, 2000 |
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Nicely written and pretty hot, though a bit short. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nel |
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Nov 24, 2000 |
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Good, some parts arousing. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Eagle |
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Nov 5, 2000 |
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The only reason this story didn't get a 10 is becasue it ended too soon! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
saltyone (Nov 17, 2000)
- Always leave them wishing for more; that's my motto
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| Reviewer:
eldon |
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Oct 27, 2000 |
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You need to be more detail in describing the pain that the slave feels durning her struggle (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
kitti |
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Sep 24, 2000 |
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Loved it. Hot, very hot. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
saltyone (Nov 17, 2000)
- Thanks for the kind words. . .You may enjoy other stories I've had posted. If you'll provide your e-mail address I'll send them to you.
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Sep 22, 2000 |
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Not bad. but it didn't really arouse me. (6/10)
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