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Overdrawn at the Sperm Bank
Author: fireball
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(Added on Jul 29, 2002)
(This month 17398 readers) (Total 41860 readers) |
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A stupid slut makes a big mistake in her job at the sperm bank and soon finds herself in a very sticky situation. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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very nice read (9/10)
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alexandra_p27
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very nice idea and somehow funny still. would have loved her drinking the mess . ;-) (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Sep 8, 2004 |
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Very enjoyable, nice little story working with a particular kink. Makes you want to suggest more favorite ideas for the author to riff on. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sklavin_alex24
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Aug 30, 2004 |
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I was very thrilled by the story. Excellent work even though I hoped, Becky would hav to drink the old cum she had spoiled. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Nov 8, 2003 |
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Enjoyable short story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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There is very little that relates the two separate and very different stories except the name of one of the protagonists. Becky is definitely not a consistently drawn character which is a very serious flaw. It would have been much better to have two distinct stories with two different lead characters. I think the author has gotten him or herself into a fine mess and probably has no chance to escape being hoisted on the proverbial petard. As stand alones, I would give story one a 6 with good potential for improvement and for the second a 5 because of the way it went to hell towards the end. As a single input is has negative synergism and gets a lower score than either of its purported parts. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
kimberly{P}
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Aug 2, 2002 |
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wow....Your imagination is truely impressive. great job...loved the enclair *weg*...Beckys character certainly gets the revenge she needed...not to mention the men huh ? *winks*...great job, thanks! (8/10)
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