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The Agreement
Author: Mellanie Hewlitt
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(Added on Aug 25, 2002)
(This month 50478 readers) (Total 66945 readers) |
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Beautiful young lawyer negotiates a terrible agreement with her bosses when she is caught pilfering funds. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 9, 2004 |
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were is part 2 (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sir Draconis
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Aug 31, 2002 |
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this si alleged to be a tale of humilating forced rape. Why would any of the Domiants depicted here even consider orally stimulaing the victim ? they are NOT into her pleasure, thay are after their own at her expense. this element of discord shatters the mythos of the tale as written and renders the tale useless. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Aug 27, 2002 |
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Nothing new in this one, what a surprise! I was off put by some word choices and a few sentences that were incomprehensible, but in general the story passes muster for grammar. I'm not at all sure I'll stick around for the rest of this one. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 25, 2002 |
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Nice story. Good intensity, good erotic content, credible 'legalese'. Could use more careful proofreading, though. A few avoidable errors.
But a promising beginning (8/10)
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