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The Cat Is Trapped
Author: Nyteskywryter
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(Added on Aug 30, 2002)
(This month 78433 readers) (Total 98701 readers) |
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A traveling young girl who has a night-time fetish as a "furry" cat burglar ... and meets her match! This story is a re-write of a story by DarkShadow_Eternal. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 9, 2006 |
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the story looks and sound firmilar (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Sep 4, 2002 |
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did the 'author' simply copy this story from "Kat in trouble" and then edit it, changing a few minor details here and there? yes. is that ok? no. Does the 'author' steal money from old ladies? that, I cant decide. of course, the actual story is decently good. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Sep 1, 2002 |
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This story has a simple plot, a couple of characters who lack much substance and an ending that is absolutely no surprise. Except for an occasional dropped stitch, the writing and grammar passes muster. My biggest gripe is that there is no "heat" generated by this "write by the numbers" tale. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
farside757
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Sep 1, 2002 |
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Having never read the story referred to in the earlier review, I thought it was a great story. I was excited. not surprised, but definitely excited. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Aug 31, 2002 |
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This story has almost exactly the same plot as "Kat in Trouble". Cat burglar
breaks into house, finds fetish clothing, tries it on, finds herself locked into it,
and is captured and made a sex slave by the owner of the house.
I hope I didn't blow the ending for anybody, but I can't imagine anyone didn't
see it coming.
This one is better written than the other one (although that's not saying much),
but is badly in need of revision just the same. The story is mostly written in
first person (with occasional annoying asides to the reader), but every once in a
while wanders off into third person narrative and
on at least one occasion first person by another character. A number of typos,
spelling errors, and malapropisms are littered about.
When Cat is first captured, we are told that her captor isn't Mr. Dean, but then it
turns out that he is Mr. Dean--I'm still not sure what's going on there.
I think this writer has potential, but needs to work on generating more original
ideas (an noted above, there is one other story on the site with the exact same
plot and probably others elsewhere) and might also consider finding an editor if
he isn't willing to perform that function himself. (6/10)
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