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The Creation Of Cumbag
Author: Steve Dema
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(Added on Oct 22, 2002)
(This month 144356 readers) (Total 202197 readers) |
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The pre-sequel of Cumbag series. Here it tells how the girl became a cumbag, just like her own mother. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
Rating: (7.5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
Rating: (4/10) |
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Reviewer:
BobbieCD
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Jan 26, 2010 |
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I'd prefer a more non-consensual theme. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
malelesbian
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Oct 27, 2004 |
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I am not sure how I want to rate this story. I like the idea of the creation of a perfect total slut from an innocent, but I feel like it could have been done with an adult. I didn't see any reason to have the mand character, Lucy(a.k.a.-Cumbag) be a child. That aside, I thought it was cool the way Cumbag seemed to be constantly begging to be fucked and used and abused. Outside of the sex, though, the story was about as interesting as a box of stale CrackerJax. Interesting idea, but more could have been done with it. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
Amber
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Jun 19, 2003 |
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An outstanding tale. A little long, but well worth it. I was easily transformed into a character of the story. Wonderful job! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
mchmj020
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Jan 6, 2003 |
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Very nice!! (9/10)
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Reviewer:
rainee
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Oct 25, 2002 |
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If one perverse and sadistic act after another is your 'thing' then this series of cumbag stories is for you.As for this reader,I enjoy a little plot,a little character development and definition.The ability to crawl into the characters minds as they go through the story.Impossible to do with this ongoing cast of plastic cut-out type characters (4/10)
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Reviewer:
renatakol
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Oct 24, 2002 |
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Cumbag is the best series of stories. Hope there will be new stories soon. (9/10)
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