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Black Takeover
Author: Paladin
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(Added on Oct 13, 2000)
(This month 53582 readers) (Total 82619 readers) |
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The black girl was fired by her boss. She and her black brothers decided that the boss and his wife should pay them back. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 22, 2006 |
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The English is terrible, no real structure to the story (5/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Jul 25, 2004 |
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I think I understand that the author was trying to express the ganster in the story. However I did not make it out of the fisrt chapter. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
tiamat3x |
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Jan 30, 2001 |
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This has the makings of a great story, but there were a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. So parts of the story were a bit far fetched, like injecting silicon directly into the breast, and putting a naked woman in a store window not to mention walking her down the street. It was just a bit too much to believe. Also it ended poorly, just because someone says you are the new CEO does not make it so, because the owner of the company not to mention the stockholders need to O.K. something like that. Try to make the stories more believable next time. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Eleanor |
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Oct 24, 2000 |
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The story deals with classic fantasy of bad black boys and girls fuckin living hell out of clean white males and females and eventually turning them into whores who enjoy every moment of being fucked and humiliated. There is barely any plot or characterization in the story and I wished the author checked his/her spelling ("meat" instead of "meet", "blead" instead of "bleed"). But the story can be a good outlet for aggresive and/or extremely masochistic interracial fantasies. And its intensity worked well for me. (3/10)
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