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The Confirmation Party
Author: Ted E. Bear
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(Added on Jan 29, 2003)
(This month 55921 readers) (Total 75286 readers) |
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A Mind Controller Story. He controls other's mind, he controls other's body, he has the power to do anything he wants. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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it simply was not anywhere near all your other works (7/10)
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Terry Gabriola
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Feb 8, 2003 |
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Sorry, but this just lacks any subtlety (I mean in the writing: I'm not particularly looking for it in the action!). That first paragraph: whop, like being hit with a baseball bat. Not to mention the odd bit of dubious English. C'mon man, I've read other stuff from you. You can do better than this! (3/10)
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