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Mistresses New Pet
Author: Scarlet Submission
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(Added on Apr 3, 2003)
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A girl is bought from a brothel, smuggled to the Uk and trained as a pet. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 14, 2005 |
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good but need to see and read more (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Apr 13, 2003 |
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A good premise with lots of potential. The material is generally good.
My main criticism is that the author moved away from the doggie aspects too readily, and for an opening chapter it raced through too many scenes too quickly. You are writing erotica, so please allow the reader to dwell on and enjoy the scenes and the feelings of the characters. (7/10)
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