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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
| Average
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 25, 2010 |
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i agree with Curtis, the opening washroom and elevator section was excellent. Very clever play with Barbara not being able to get anywhere with the secretary (i have met a few just like her). But the animal scene was rushed and seemed out of place with the rest of the story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 21, 2009 |
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Loved it from start to finish. An erotic high!
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 19, 2004 |
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Can't explain exactly what is is but there was something realy unique about this story, made for a good read (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 11, 2003 |
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I agree with Emily that the elevator scene was excellant. The animal stuff at the end seemed rushed, like you thought the story had gone on long enough and just wanted it over. You had some formatting problems, especially near the beginning, with your paragraph indents varying a lot. This kind of had the feeling of 'stock footage', if you know what I mean. Keep working at this, try to steer clear of cliches and re-read the elevator scene for yourself to see what it was about it that worked so well. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 7, 2003 |
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The most erotic part to this story for me was at the beginning and that elevator scene! Wow, I could really feel the tension. I really loved this one. I would love to see more Barbie Humper stories? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Jul 2, 2003 |
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Bit to long, i did like the animals the best - wondering if there are parfumes like that on the market?! (hehe) not bad story all together
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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Jul 2, 2003 |
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Interesting idea.
Too long and the animals are simply silly.
(6/10)
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