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A Game of Dress-up
Author: dr_mabeuse
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(Added on Aug 7, 2003)
(This month 60735 readers) (Total 95032 readers) |
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Vanessa's private pleasure of dressing like whore gets her in trouble when a neighbor misinterprets |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
agirlsfantasy
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Feb 8, 2010 |
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I really enjoyed this story. The way it was written I could easily feel exactly what she was feeling and thinking. I just wish it hadn't ended so suddenly... what was she feeling afterwards? Did she "babysit" again? etc. But otherwise, great short. (8/10)
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magnum
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May 19, 2006 |
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I thouroughly enjoyed the story. Your writing is detailed enough to capture the emotion, and not so detailed as to draw the story into tedium. (9/10)
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chksng19
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May 19, 2006 |
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A sub inside learns her true colors? Kind of. Not a bad story, Doc. I'd love to see it expanded. (8/10)
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Master2124
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May 18, 2006 |
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This story is well written from the view point of the young woman concerned. It describes the desires and feelings of a sub wanna be. (7/10)
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Borborad
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May 15, 2006 |
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The description of my rating says it all :-)
(9/10)
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mkemse
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May 11, 2006 |
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great story great concept great idea, i read read it anf have to give you a 10 plus (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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May 11, 2006 |
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Great story! The only problem I found in it was that you repeated yourself about the girl's mom and brother being gone. But it made me wet, so it's a keeper! (8/10)
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SaphireKitten
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Nov 27, 2004 |
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Great story!!! I enjoyed it extremely. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mistress PJ
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Aug 5, 2004 |
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I enjoyed this story very much. Keep up the great work! (9/10)
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playstar
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Apr 25, 2004 |
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I didn't like the ending.
And the dialogue was so obvious. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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Take me to Whores-R-Us and dress me please! (8/10)
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