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Happy Birthday Bitch Author: forcer
(Added on Jan 23, 2001) (This month 20334 readers) (Total 60774 readers)
A surprise party for his girlfriend and she were really... surprised. gang rape, ws, torture,good stuff.

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Weighed Average (?): (4/10)
Average Rating: (4/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: May 2, 2004
got real lost in it, seemd like you want to set it up more then do the story,, it was ok, then you suddenly swtiched view of the story
Also in the story line it says "Good Stuff" never found any of it (4/10)

Reviewer: lee Rating: Apr 1, 2001
read better not much though (6/10)

Reviewer: sandy brown Rating: Feb 4, 2001
not bad-very kinky (7/10)

Reviewer: Painfully_Yours Rating: Jan 27, 2001
too superficial. (2/10)

Reviewer: B Rating: Jan 27, 2001
Childish characters, difficult to follow the action, poor grammar. Never could figure out how she was positioned. (2/10)

Reviewer: LM Rating: Jan 23, 2001
I must agree with my feloow reader. The grammar and laguage use is not of an acceptable level. It appears there was little thought and story devolopment. Even though this is a fantasy the fantsy seems far fetched. As always, Please feel frr to contact me. (3/10)

Reviewer: mm Rating: Jan 23, 2001
The use of grammer and text, make it almost unreadable. (3/10)

Reviewer: hyphen 666 Rating: Jan 23, 2001
Too short, too much build-up and not enough details. Better luck next time. (4/10)

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