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The Bet
Author: Dockink
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(Added on Aug 18, 2003)
(This month 107528 readers) (Total 160680 readers) |
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Two brothers bet which can break a slave faster. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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Excellent story. Well written and the plot was excellent. Maybe one day there might be a story about the other slaves in their new lives. (9/10)
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bisarah
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Mar 30, 2005 |
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this must have been a story directed at men, because it certainly did nothing for me. that being said, at least you do know how to write a paragraph and i do appreciate that! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Sep 27, 2003 |
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Great story. Very enjoyable and inventive with only minor spelling errors. (9/10)
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padagat
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Sep 9, 2003 |
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need to add new chapters..... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bobanddianne
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Aug 28, 2003 |
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Great concept in an enticing story... the intensity is enchanting as we anticipate the arrival of future chapters... keep those chapters coming.
(10/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 21, 2003 |
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So far the story is OUTSTANDING, just waiting for many more chapters to be posted so I can continue to enjoy it (10/10)
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Tygress
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Aug 19, 2003 |
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So far its great. When do we get more? (9/10)
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Lord Douche
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Aug 19, 2003 |
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Excellent story. I liked the touch of the two girls names not getting capitals (I assume this was on purpose, since the other characters are capitalised) (9/10)
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