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Command Performance Author: Cortez
(Added on Sep 20, 2003) (This month 32869 readers) (Total 70007 readers)
Glenda and her partner Kid are on the run after a robbery. Their hideout is a large isolated house and Glenda has done her homework. Eighteen year old Helene is all alone practising the piano...and the music room is soundproof. Using the 'toys' in Glenda's bag, they force Helene to provide a very special and painful performance for their own private pleasure.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: LordVetinari (Edit) Rating: Mar 25, 2005
Another great story, and well worth the reading. Here's hoping we see more tales of Helene, and perhaps her stepmother Melissa as well. (9/10)

Reviewer: Emily (Edit) Rating: Oct 3, 2003
Cumbersome, but a rather exciting read. Especially interesting on the details and humiliation scenes. I do not understand the single quotation marks, perhaps it is just me? (8/10)

Reviewer: kittenfemme (Edit) Rating: Sep 24, 2003
Please continue! (8/10)

Reviewer: Lord Douche (Edit) Rating: Sep 23, 2003
Excellent story, Cortez. Poor Helene :) (9/10)

Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Sep 22, 2003
This is an excellently written story that generates enormous heat. It would be a shame to end it this way. (9/10)

Reviewer: bdsmbill (Edit) Rating: Sep 21, 2003
I liked this one. (9/10)

Reviewer: hd1955 (Edit) Rating: Sep 21, 2003
Hey i liked it. easy to read and has good plot as do his other stories (9/10)

Reviewer: SMartie57 (Edit) Rating: Sep 20, 2003
I especially loved the detailed description of Helene's degradation and humiliation. The punishnments were too middle of the road for my taste. (7/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Sep 20, 2003
Great so far, hope there is lots mmore (9/10)

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