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Complete Surrender
Author: Doug Young
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(Added on Sep 24, 2003)
(This month 21807 readers) (Total 53994 readers) |
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A man is controlled by his Mistress and trained to do her bidding. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 9, 2006 |
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Good start (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Aug 8, 2004 |
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Excellent start would love to read more chapters. (9/10)
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crickette
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Oct 8, 2003 |
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I think this is a good beginning and I cannot wait to read the rest. i like the way you were able to relate a level of intensity and anticipation without coming right out and saying it. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Holly
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Oct 7, 2003 |
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Nice start to what could be a great story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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This story has a nice feminine feel to it. One can almost feel the feminine stroking in this one. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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I do not care for FemDom stories, this is one of the few exceptions to this (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Sep 26, 2003 |
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A very good start, I'm looking forward to seeing additonal installments. Please keep up the good work. (9/10)
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abitbent
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Sep 24, 2003 |
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Doug has done a nice job so far. What's great about what i've read, is it does appear to be realistic and not over the top. It didn't leave me hard and shaking, but hard none the less. :o) (8/10)
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