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Time Gentlemen Please
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Oct 11, 2003)
(This month 11564 readers) (Total 29731 readers) |
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You can find the price for being greedy a little more than you want to pay. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 18, 2003 |
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Really very enjoyable. I do think the narrator spent too much time explaining why he wasn't intervening to save his wife, and I'm not sure if this meets the 'hardcore' story code (it IS a gang rape, after all), but far and away the best work I've seen from this author. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Oct 14, 2003 |
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I never thought I'd be using the words "well written" and "Pagan", in the same sentence. Now pardon me while I mount my pig and fly away. Well done Pagan.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Oct 13, 2003 |
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You`ve the knack. Erotic, believable and fun. Good job. (8/10)
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