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Babysitting A Slut
Author: ric
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(Added on Oct 14, 2003)
(This month 58717 readers) (Total 78785 readers) |
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I planed on going out Saturday night and trying to hook up. Jill my beautiful neighbor knocked on my door with a sob story. She just about begged me to watch he daughter for the night. Jenny is a cute ten year-old with blond hair. Jenny walked in as if she owned the place, as I turned, I got my first good look at what she was wearing. I wondered if this little girl new she was putting out signals. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 28, 2005 |
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not good no bad real so-so (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Nov 28, 2003 |
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Babysitting a slut was pretty good. It was a little slow paced and not very descriptive. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Oct 17, 2003 |
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I agree with Powerone, and he/she/they/it describe the story quite well. (Though, the author did use the correct description for the content- Young is used on the site for underage ones, and Teen would be for 13-17 or so) (4/10)
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Powerone
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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I should have known better when there already was a grammar error in the introduction (this little girl knew she was, not this little girl new she was). Once inside the story it got worse, planned, not planed, fell through, not fell threw, her instead of he: and that was the first two paragraphs.
There were three huge paragraphs, with changing characters speaking jammed in the one paragraph. The next large paragraph seemed to be a collection of sentences all beginning with "She"
Now to the actual story. It did not do much for me. I think you mentioned the two main characters name twice and then it seemed that I was only an observer having it related to me, he said, she said. The sex part was terrible, she stripped, grabbed his cock and then she was cumming. No wonder the character has to get 10 year olds.
Finally, you should have used a story code of pedo, not young. Young usually is 13 and over, this character was 10. I'm sure you will hear some comments on that. (4/10)
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