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Xtreme Shorts
Author: XtremeInk
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(Added on Oct 21, 2003)
(This month 39419 readers) (Total 67119 readers) |
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These are just a series of short stories that are unconnected. They contain anything that catches my eye and could possibly very nasty. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 16, 2010 |
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Ann and Rita were a delight. The other two were less agreeable.
Nevertheless, all three stories are well written and again very inventive.
The pace was also good, this time, leaving more space for a bit of a reflection for the reader.
I'd rate the stories as 9/7/8, which leaves an averaged total of 8...
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jake_t42
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Mar 3, 2006 |
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Loved it. You have very imaginative tortures which is very refreshing to see. Keep up the great work. I'm sure you'll find lots of great ideas to work in. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 23, 2004 |
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i love the way you wrote this, nothing was left untoucjed and the detail is very good
hope to see more in the future of the same (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 16, 2004 |
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Talk about cutting to the chase, these three do it in spades! This is a great way to generate enormous amounts of heat with no wasted motion. Your stock characters really shine in this type of setting. All pain sluts, all of the time; I can deal with that! I'd love to see more of this high calorie fare in the future. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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Not very interesting at all. (4/10)
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qc_94
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Nov 12, 2003 |
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We are breathless!!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
stimpy
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Oct 31, 2003 |
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Very Nice. Like your imagination -- the way you go beyond the same old stuff. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
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Oct 27, 2003 |
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Awesome! These little shorts have wildly turned me on, and that ain't easy to do these days. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 26, 2003 |
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That was an averaging rating for all three stories. Seperately I would give the first a '10', the second an'8' and the third...probably an '8'. The third starts slowly and goes over into the stomach-churning stuff again, but very hot. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
XtremeInk
(Edit) (Oct 26, 2003)
- Curtis,
I'm glad that you think I have some good ideas and some of the action in the stories is hot. But I have to tell you - almost every xTi story has scent play (that un-hygenic stuff) and one (that I haven't posted yet) contians some serious scat play PLUS the un-hygenic stuff. I can assure you that THAT story, you'd consider to be much more than just stomach churning.
I should also mention that I thank you for your reviews. I'm not bitching about what you wrote or about the rating you gave. I'm always excited when people take the time to review something I wrote.
Keep reading and keep reviewing! And thanks!
xTi
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e.e. norcod
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Oct 23, 2003 |
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Ann and Rita was very good. Excellent graphic description and a reasonable attempt to illustrate the characters of Ann and Rita.<br>Katie was also very good although without the nice twist at the end that makes Ann and Rita exceptional.
Tami receives some very perverted and imaginative tortures. The story grows progressively darker as it goes on and has a slight twist at the end. However, still not as good as the first story.
All in all a very nice effort. Keep up the good work. I would like to see you write something in either a work-related setting or a scholastic or judicial venue.
Good luck. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
XtremeInk
(Edit) (Oct 23, 2003)
- I've written something called Pauline. I haven't worked on it for a while, but will eventually finish it. It is set in school. It's also a very nasty story.
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