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Date Night
Author: mwmsissy
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(Added on Oct 21, 2003)
(This month 91446 readers) (Total 130378 readers) |
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A mostly true story of how my wife took charge of our life. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
quagmirething
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Aug 8, 2005 |
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It wasn't easy to decide on a grade for this story. It starts off in a domestic setting, and does some very nice stuff with the cuckold theme. This seemed well observed to me and I was looking forward to seeing how it was developed. Sadly it then moved into the realm of BDSM mansion, so I would have the question the "real" tag for this story. It seemed odd that the couple were allowed to join the group at all, as the wife spent most of her time just having vanilla sex with other tops. But I would still recommend the first half of the story as a delightful start to a domestic femdom story. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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Well told, and you can feel the realism coming through in the writing. Nice work and a fun read. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Jan 1, 2004 |
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Very good and realistic story. Our only complaint is the beginning of each chapter with a quick rehash of the previous chapter. Very few writing errors while the content was original and exciting. (9/10)
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trainmanretep
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Oct 24, 2003 |
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overall quite good. The writing skills are actually better than what the standardised rating above allows. (6/10)
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abitbent
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Oct 22, 2003 |
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Although sissy stories don't appeal to me, the content was kept realistic which was great. The syntax was nice too as far as grammar, spelling and paragraph structure, which is something that seems to be slowly disappearing lately. I must admit though, the story was almost flawless ultil I read this:
"Very pretty dearie," she exclaimed admiring her
handiwork.
Ahhh... there it is... My theory is, it's virtually impossible to write a D/s story without using the dreaded word "handiwork". :o)
All kidding aside, was a good read so enjoy. (8/10)
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