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Bavel Author: Ms. Michele
(Added on Dec 14, 2003) (This month 49085 readers) (Total 62352 readers)
Dungeon games with Ms. Clare in an alternate reality on a distant world.

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: Coriia (Edit) Rating: Apr 21, 2008
I really liked this story even though it looks unfinished. I loved the dialog, the interplay between characters was very nice. The technical elements could use some polish. I find myself disappointed that its over. (7/10)

Reviewer: le forgeron (Edit) Rating: Feb 22, 2005
First part's review only, 3 scenes so far.
Interesting settings, might benefit from more description of pre-scene (background, environment, how are they dressed, what's the weather...).
Transition (journey ?) from one scene to another could help too.
What are the main character's motivations ?
So far the tagging is not fully satisfied... hoping to see more in the following part. (5/10)

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