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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
(Edit) |
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Sep 16, 2005 |
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Like everyone else, I wish it had been longer.
It's well-crafted, though; I like the parallel
structure of the set up and the conclusion.
I'm old school and pleased to see paragraphs
with the 1st line indented -- though I don't
understand why the dialogue paragraphs are all
left-justified. All in all, well done.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Jan 20, 2004 |
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And where was the Hall Monitor, in this case? The principal? Regardless, "P&P-T'sT" is well wrought by the writer who remains consistent throughout - including a fine backstory (no pun intended). <br>Should be good reading for all.
As you can see, SS 88 also has impeccable manners which only serve to add further attractiveness to the "P&P" series. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
SirStroker88
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2004)
- Faibhar
Thank you for the kind words.
Rgds.
SS88
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| Reviewer:
CarolinaSpkr
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Jan 15, 2004 |
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This had the feel of Summer 42.
One of my favourite books and movies in high school.
Good job, was this your inspiraion? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Satan_Klaus
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Jan 15, 2004 |
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while I usually enjoy longer stories this one packs a lot of content for such a short story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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one big issue i have with the story is everything went way to fast, you get 1/2 down the first page and it is already the next day, to fast not enough details (7/10)
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- Replied by:
SirStroker88
(Edit) (Jan 14, 2004)
- Fair enough, thanks for the review.
Rgds,
SS88
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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A good 'very short'. It is remarkable how much character one can pack into a brief story and the author has managed to create two pretty good characters in an amazingly brief space. The only reason I didn't give this a ten was that I would have liked a little bit more discriptive color. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
SirStroker88
(Edit) (Jan 14, 2004)
- I always go through an internal battle over the length of my stories. Actually they all start out pretty long.Including this one. It's my ruthless editing process and re-writes that pare them down. There is always a danger of losing too much color on the cutting room floor. I appreciate being reminded of that and your score.
Rgds.
SS88
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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I also thought this was a good "quickie." The unwilling cheerleaders didn't bother me, although I thought it an unnessary touch. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
SirStroker88
(Edit) (Jan 14, 2004)
- Unnecessary touch! If you undertake a careful reread my friend you will see that the cheerleader reference was an absolutely essential element in the plot line. Just kidding!! Thanks for the kind score and review.
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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This very short story is well written and packs quite a punch. I liked the ending and the way the author tied up all the loose ends in one fell swoop. My only quibble was with the "unwilling" coeds. Doesn't that constitute rape or at least assault? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
SirStroker88
(Edit) (Jan 14, 2004)
- Thanks for the feedback. You make a good point. My intent was to use the adj. unwilling as in: done or given reluctantly.
I seem to have implied "forced" sex.
In light of your comment I probably should have used an adjective that left less room for that interpretation. Live/Learn. Once again, thanks for your comment and the generous score.
Rgds
SS88
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