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Useful Humilation
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on Feb 20, 2004)
(This month 29782 readers) (Total 72798 readers) |
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Tammy is suprised when her friend Rose tells her she has her philandering husband under lock and key. She is even more suprised when Rose tells her she is going away with her boyfriend and wants Tammy to look after the key while she's gone. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
pumpkints
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Jul 15, 2008 |
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Personally, a pierced tip gives me the willies. And i LOVED it! This story is not really about the chastised husband. It is about the neighbor.
This is a very well done story. Scene builds from an unexpected revelation from a friend, to self discovery and acceptance. The reasons were very believable. Just wonder what the old man down the street thought about the two going to each other's houses so much.
And best of all, it leaves open the possibilities for more. Yes, it can just end at the 3rd part. But it can also continue from there. Or, the reader can build their own fantasy upon this wonderful foundation.
Miss Diaz is such a good story teller that i do hope there will be more!?
pumpkin (10/10)
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topsfrombottom
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Dec 20, 2006 |
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Outstanding (as usual), Ms. Carmencia.
Gazing up at You from the floor -
(where we 'manimals' so truly belong),
tfb.. (10/10)
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BigCat
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Oct 7, 2005 |
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Very well done. Excellent femdom coming out. Nice touches all along. (10/10)
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trainmanretep
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Jul 25, 2004 |
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really liked all three segments. (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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May 8, 2004 |
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Short (like this review), but it gave a good feeling for the desperation of being bound.
(updated) A good continuation to the story.
(updated again) I really liked part 3. The continued reason for the domme to do what she did was wonderful. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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ok i guess, Femdom not my thing (7/10)
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- Replied by:
topsfrombottom
(Edit) (Dec 20, 2006)
- Then don't READ things with 'F/m', 'F+/m', F+/m+ et cetera, Flintstone. And, if you happen to do so, don't review it. I mean, really - WHO the HELL cares about a GARDENERS opinion regarding, say, the vintage-choices for a WINE-TASTING event? NOBODY, that's who. So, go back to your cave, shake open a newspaper 'Sports' section, and leave culture to the Cultured. Oh - and any REAL man would offer an apology to Ms. Diaz - for dissing a fine vintage which you knew nothing about. So 'man-up' and apologize.
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topsfrombottom
(Edit) (Dec 20, 2006)
- Then don't READ things with 'F/m', 'F+/m', F+/m+ et cetera, Flintstone. And, if you happen to do so, don't review it. I mean, really - WHO the HELL cares about a GARDENERS opinion regarding, say, the vintage-choices for a WINE-TASTING event? NOBODY, that's who. So, go back to your cave, shake open a newspaper 'Sports' section, and leave culture to the Cultured. Oh - and any REAL man would offer an apology to Ms. Diaz - for dissing a fine vintage which you knew nothing about. So 'man-up' and apologize.
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Roamer
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Mar 18, 2004 |
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I like the sense of sneaky humour. I'm hoping there's more and I disagree with others, I think the style of the author is rather cool. The plot lines of these stories are allways predictable but I suspect there's more to this one. I hope she posts it.
REVISED:
I enjoyed this! A very solid story from a female perspective that seemed to be very real. The sex was average but the decription and character development were the best I've read on this site.
Tip: Get an editor and keep writing. (I searched the site and there are no more of her stories) (10/10)
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lex ludite
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Mar 17, 2004 |
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The ending is rather ambivalent, if it is an ending. The writing is simple and direct, a skill that many authors still haven't learned to perfect. The subject matter may not sit well with many of the readers, but that is their problem. The characters are stereotypical, a problem common to almost any of the literature appearing on his site. The amount of heat is minimal, too much talk and very little action. On the whole this seems like an average effort, unless the author has a few tricks in the bag that haven't been shown. In the event that is the case, I will be very happy to revise my rating upward. Now that the story has ended, at least for now, and sort of happily at that for all parties, my rating, for whatever its now worth will be readjusted upwards. (6/10)
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Enos Quill
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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A premise that deserves more development. Good story telling skills -- for most authors, less is more, but in this case, the author needs to add description. I agree with other reviewers that the ending leaves one unsatisfied - and that is because a good job was done leading up to it. The story left me hanging, craving more. So give it to me, pleeeeease.
Revision, part 2: Better description, and the story is beginning to live up to its great premise. For part 3, I am looking forward to tammy dropping her inhibitions and really taking advantage of the situation. Just my suggestion. Am revising my rating to a 9. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Feb 22, 2004 |
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Well written, but we're not sure if the story has ended or if there were plans to continue it. (7/10)
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soleil
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Feb 20, 2004 |
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Well written, with only a few minor grammar/punctuation glitches.
Keep it going :) (8/10)
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bdsmbill
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Feb 20, 2004 |
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Well written, but too short. You quit just when the story was getting interesting. Too bad. (7/10)
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