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Four Seasons
Author: Joanna O'Dwyer
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(Added on Mar 9, 2004)
(This month 17844 readers) (Total 32817 readers) |
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Snapshots of a year in the life of a devoted slave, the good and the bad. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Silus
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Jan 29, 2008 |
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Great reading (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
loserslave01
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Sep 7, 2007 |
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Very good read..
made me cry (10/10)
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longrover
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Nov 24, 2004 |
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Very well done -- carefully designed and well written. I don't usually like "i" and I didn't like her reference to "our" apartment, but everything became clear in the end. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 18, 2004 |
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I had a hard time deciding between '7' and '8' for the first chapter. Aside from the author's decision to go with 'i', instead of 'I', her grammar and punctuation are probably better than mine. Something about this story disgruntles me, and I can't put my finger on it. I didn't form a very positive image of the heroine, but I rather liked the mistress. Hopefully, I'll be able to get a better 'read' on it as it develops.//(October edit) I get it now, having read all four parts. This is a psycological piece, not a jerk-off piece. I can't even begrudge the small 'i' anymore. Readers, be aware that this story builds smoothly and logically; you'll need to read the whole thing to get the effect, but the best is saved for last. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
crimson
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Aug 24, 2004 |
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well done!!!! lovely, fantastic writing.. your work always flows SO well.. it draws the reader right in... but you only get 9 cause i want more!!!!! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sui Lerua
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Jul 15, 2004 |
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The very concision of this piece may be offputting to some readers (to judge by other reviews here), but the writing is finely crafted with an emotional depth which exists even though I don't really know the characters. I enjoyed the references to the seasons which cleverly add to the sensuality of this story. (9/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Jul 2, 2004 |
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I have liked the snapshots but they need to be a little more lengthy. A little more look at the interaction between the characters. Good story basist just need a little more depth... Please (7/10)
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