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The Story of Sonja
Author: steven
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(Added on Mar 21, 2004)
(This month 52336 readers) (Total 65630 readers) |
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A young 18 year old virgin Roman slave girl assassin named Sonja is sent by the lovely Empress Estella of Rome, a deadly mission to obtain a powerful amulet from the sexy and cruel witch Katana. On, her journey Sonja encounters plenty of suffering, but in the end the lovely heroine is rewarded for her efforts by the lovely Empress. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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Love the subject matter - and the time frame! -- and the author shows good imagination (without which there can be no story) but needs more practice at writing. Too many over-long paragraphs and a number of choppy sentences. Also, perhaps it's just me, but I don't care for the inclusion of body measurements in a story (unless the girl is a model or something. This is particularly true if one is using inches to describe a person who lived in a time or place where inches was not the standard of measurement. But, as I said, the author's inventiveness shows promise. Good luck on future stories! (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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good story just not into the time frame (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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A delightful fantasy tale marred only by quirky things like odd syntax and improbable (for that historic period) things like dimension readouts and catsuits.
Worth any reader's time. (7/10)
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Lord Douche
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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The story itself is okay. It needs a lot of grammar checking, and could do with some paragraphs!
BTW, you use the world "lovely" three times in the Synopsis :) (5/10)
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