|
|
|
|
|
Alice And The Package
Author: Sir Stroker88
|
| |
(Added on Apr 29, 2004)
(This month 72748 readers) (Total 113693 readers) |
| |
A young HS teacher receives a mysterious package. She finds out too late that it was sent by one of her students with evil intent. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 10 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
10% |
0% |
30% |
50% |
10% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (6/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
GaelstormIRA
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Aug 28, 2005 |
| |
Good story, but waiting to read more of it. Hopefully you will start to post more chapters. And hopefully you will not fade away like some authors, love what I read. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
BigCat
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Aug 17, 2005 |
| |
Well done. Hot. (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
emmacd
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 7, 2005 |
| |
The plot was the usual that you read here every day. It was worth reading and showed some writting ability. I would like to see more. Emma (6/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
littleslut
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Aug 3, 2004 |
| |
great story i realy enjoyed it (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
anne_chang
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 28, 2004 |
| |
Wow, I so wished I was her! (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
SirStroker88
(Edit) (Aug 2, 2004)
- Nice thought, thank you.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
teamster
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 8, 2004 |
| |
It seems like Alice's journey is just getting started. I"m betting Jason has lots of more ideas. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Curtis
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 2, 2004 |
| |
I like this story alot, but I do have one question: How did Jason know to send her the gift? If he'd sent it after his first encounter with her, it would make more sense to me. (8/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
SirStroker88
(Edit) (May 4, 2004)
- There is MUCH more to Jason than meets the eye.
Thanks for the review.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
ojy1
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 1, 2004 |
| |
Don't stop now! (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
dragonheart
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Apr 30, 2004 |
| |
great story. please continue. (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Apr 29, 2004 |
| |
that is all i need to say HOT, HOT, HOT hope you post more (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
SirStroker88
(Edit) (Apr 29, 2004)
- Thank You, Thank You, Thank You. I will.
SS88
|
|
|
About 