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Stepmomma's Dirty Lesbian Slave Girl
Author: Victoria Medusa
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(Added on May 6, 2004)
(This month 74512 readers) (Total 125575 readers) |
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I got pregnant and had an abortion just before Dad left for the war in Iraq. On Stepmomma's advise, Dad allowed Stepmomma to punish me by whipping me hard with a belt and be under her discipline and authority. I got my first whipping the day Dad left. That very day I also became Stepmomma's dirty lesbian slave girl. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Kingofsting
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Mar 19, 2008 |
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Liked this one a lot. Hope to read more. (7/10)
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El_Gato
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Jan 28, 2008 |
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It's a very wonderful story!
English is not my language and i have some difficult to following the spelling, but I hope to read other adventures of this wonderful, sensual slavegirl.
My compliments to you and many thanks for have wrote this story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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May 8, 2004 |
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This odd little story does have its moments, but not enough of them. The author gets high marks for letting it all hang out, but poor grades for following through on all the juicy details that we perverts look forward to in a story of this type.It sort of reminds me of early Allene before she found her groove. At times the sentence structure and dialogue seems to spin out of control, especially when the author is shuttling back and forth between the girl and her step-mother. That can be remedied, but the issue of coming correct with respect to generating maximum heat is something that may be beyond the ability of the author. (5/10)
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ahlicker
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May 8, 2004 |
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wonderfully thought out story, spelling however...
please please please continue!! (10/10)
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ms2bused
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May 6, 2004 |
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The story itself is truly fantastic but the spelling could be vastly improved!
Victoria, if this truly is your way of life now, I totally envy you! To switch places with you would be the very summation of all my dreams and fantasies!
PLEASE continue your story as to me, it is truly intoxicating! (10/10)
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