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Janne and Her Cruel Daddy
Author: asbjorn
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(Added on Jul 16, 2004)
(This month 91416 readers) (Total 145593 readers) |
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Narrator and girlfriend play an S&M incest fantasy with an extraordinarily cruel and loving approach. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Shibari
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Oct 28, 2010 |
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WOW! Can't say much else about it...I'm speechless. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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May 1, 2005 |
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Hot, believable.
Deep breath.
Outstanding! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
asbjorn
(Edit) (May 10, 2005)
- Thanks for the high number review. I am glad you found it believable, seeing as how it is not too far from an actual experience. Glad I kept the integrity of the scene in bringing it to the page.
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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May 1, 2005 |
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I personally find the little girl routine extremely off-putting, but other than that, this story is hot. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
asbjorn
(Edit) (May 10, 2005)
- Unfortunately, it is an integral part of the relationship portrayed. I can see it becoming annoying, but the only way to lose it is to go to a new piece, which I eventually will do. The problem with basing things on real events. Thanks for the other kind words, however.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 17, 2005 |
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Nice story, to bad the room mate or Rosie did not get to enjoy her as well (8/10)
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- Replied by:
asbjorn
(Edit) (Apr 20, 2005)
- uh, what roommate? part of the point of this story is that the party was an average xmas party with people who probably would have been a little weirded out by the action in Rosie's daughter's bedroom. There wasn't a roommate.
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| Reviewer:
delish
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Dec 13, 2004 |
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A very well composed story. I'd like to see more from the author, be it fantasy, reality or a little of both again. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
muddpup11
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Jul 18, 2004 |
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would like to see this play out...sounds like the 2 charactoers...want to be together...but heck...you be the writer right ?? Thanks (8/10)
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- Replied by:
asbjorn
(Edit) (Jul 28, 2004)
- Thanks for the review. The source material took place 25 years ago, and though they might have wanted to be together, the actuality is that this was close to the end of things. So it's a single shot posting.
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| Reviewer:
tsosie
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Jul 16, 2004 |
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This was a very good story. I liked the mix of fantasy and reality blended inside one narrative. Very hot scene as well. Definitely a great read :) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
asbjorn
(Edit) (Jul 28, 2004)
- thanks for the generous response to my first post. Though not from life per se, it does represent a version of scene(s) that I have had. And yes, very hot indeed.
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