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The Miss Daisy Chronicles
Author: Eurytion
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(Added on Sep 20, 2004)
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The Miss Daisy Chronicles are a stand-alone group of stories set in the same universe as Cannibal 4H; a universe where, as the result of "The Great Disaster," humans are used as livestock and cannibalism is the accepted norm. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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What stands out here, are the descriptions of the characters and their surroundings. Usually, they are but mere bleak blotches in a vast, inert landscape, here however, they are well defined, colourful pinpoints, bobbing on an ever moving ocean.
That, and the well-woven plot, make this a must read.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 17, 2004 |
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A familiar scenario, but a fresh twist. Nice to see, and looking forward to the next chapter. A little more description of the characters might help paint them in my mind: Mom is skinny and starved, bad guy has long curled moustache and wears spats with his hammerclaw coat and top hat, whatever.
It's a very readable story, however, and went away leaving the audience wanting more, like all good art.
New chapters have defined characters well, and remain at a high level of quality. Writing is literate and edited well. Story continues to keep me wanting more.
Chapter 4 continues an excellent story, maintaining the quality. The informative way the councilor discusses herself and her faith, and the open, easy discussion about careers makes me wish I'd had guidance like that!
Keep posting! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Eurytion
(Edit) (Sep 23, 2004)
- Thanks for the kind words. This introductory chapter was intended set the stage for what is to come, including giving some background for readers not familar with the C4H Universe. I'll be interested in reading your reaction as the Chronicles continue and everything deepens.
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webdazell
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Oct 9, 2004 |
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Well written but, as you seemed to be suggesting, Iwon't make a final call on it until its finished. Seems to be moving in the correct direction, like the previous reviewer I'm glad to seem better development of characters. But where's the sex? (10/10)
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