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The Survey
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Oct 2, 2004)
(This month 66144 readers) (Total 74784 readers) |
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A woman gets more than she bargained for when she persistently tries to get a man, more interested in his work than the proposed new road, to fill in a survey form. He ensnares her using 'mouse magic'. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Apr 26, 2005 |
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I liked the story a lot. I've known people like Tom, maybe I'm like that myself, and sometimes things move fast. Janet certainly found what she was looking for. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Oct 3, 2004 |
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There are some authors who consistantly write good fiction, and this person is one of them. The premise is fresh. Writing skills are obvious and developed, but I agree with the other reviewer that this might have been a better story with some richer description of what was going on in the character's minds during certain parts of the story, such as the first meeting, the lovemaking, the arrival of Charlene, what happens the second evening after the dinner (at home), etc. A little more would help with understanding the character, especially Tom.
The story moves fast, flows well, and leaves you wanting more. Nice stuff! (9/10)
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Breannefun
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Oct 2, 2004 |
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I enjoyed this, but I found Tom to be too crude for my liking, despite being an artist. Everything was really fast, boom boom boom with no tension building. I would have liked more description of the love making. (8/10)
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