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The Lunch Hour
Author: Nicolae Tobin
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(Added on Nov 14, 2004)
(This month 48860 readers) (Total 57460 readers) |
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A rather unorthodox lunch break. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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Two good stories in a row. Hmmmm. Our lovers have started a tit-for-tat (pardon the pun) game with each other. It seemed to me (just my opinion here) that he was justified in punishing her but that her retaliation was not justified. If she is the one who gives in, their relationship moves to a different level. An extra point because a possible sequel has a greater challenge. Thanks! (9/10)
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