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Dexter Chronicles
Author: Mysty Mason
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(Added on Dec 18, 2004)
(This month 167248 readers) (Total 261688 readers) |
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This story is about a new reality. It is decidedly femdom, "hermaphrodite dominant," nonconsensual and not for the squeamish. On the surface, it is simply about a boy and his mother making adjustments for a new changing relationship. But as with all human interactions, there is more. I hope you enjoy this little tale. Let me know. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Feb 1, 2012 |
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This story is the product of delightfully wicked imagination, and I find various elements very sexy. Kudos! On the other hand, the story is very disorganised and the plot grows rampant all over the place. Also, there are too many characters without individual traits; the female characters are all interchangeable. Nicely cruel, but all in the same way.
My pragmatic mind tends to kick in and ask, why do these characters go through the bother of getting a princk? As far as I can see, everything it is good for, chemical dependence, oral and anal rape, and the bearer's physical pleasure, can all easily be achieved by other means. Well, for those who like this fetish: cute idea.
A feature I find superbly executed throughout the entire story: All these nonconsensually enslaved men are scared. And their - completely justified - fear is described with relish. Yum yum!!
Anyway, please continue writing! My advice for this story would be: Develop distinct characters with individual mental makeup and predilections. Narrow down the plot to fewer strands. Give the events a pinch of teleology, meaning that they are clearly leading somewhere. Think about how and when you wish your story to end, and deliberately take it to the grand finale.
Mysty, I hope to read more from your devious mind, namely sexy tortures of nicely scared men, and will drop by this page again! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
mystymason
(Edit) (Sep 9, 2005)
- Hmm. I think this review is a compliment.
Rani, you may not like the character development, and you may miss a male-oriented “grand finale,” but you need to understand that I’m not making this thing up. As a scribe would, I just write this stuff down. And, this “story” as you call it hasn’t even begun to be written. You would like more design and purpose? Well, so would I. But do I know what’s coming around the corner? No more than you do when the elevator door opens, and two attractive, giggling well-built young women with pleated skirts barely covering their below-the-belt-throbbing-thingies welcome you, pull you in, press the basement button, and then casually drag you — while you’re screaming for help between your panicked gasps — into their aunt’s waiting minivan for a weekend at her summer home. Stuff just happens sometimes.
- Replied by:
Ranai
(Edit) (Oct 1, 2005)
- *Bing – thump – gasp – whoosh – aargh – bang – vroooom...*
Thanks! :-)
Yes, of course it is a compliment. I like the story a lot and hope you’ll continue.
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slaveatif
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Mar 21, 2010 |
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i have not write many reviews but this story force me to write
i can say this is one of the finest stories i have read
i like the idea very much of trans domination
ofcourse i want to live in such world (10/10)
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Nick Carraway
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Feb 25, 2009 |
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Amazing story. It is only a shame that after all of the this buildup for the final confrontation, this story has been abandoned. Please give us the payoff we all deserve. (9/10)
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bullfinch
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Feb 19, 2008 |
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please could the author continue this super story. (9/10)
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sunburststrat
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Jun 14, 2005 |
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Wow, I hardly know what to say. This really fires up the imagination and pushes some buttons I'm reluctant to even admit I have. I rarely read f/m and the only other one I can remember was altogether too "polite." This story is not polite at all! It is intense!!! My head's been spinning since Chapter 4 when the sexy masterful Dr. Stacy Phillips was leading Dr. Michael Dolin around by the nose. Instructing him to stop the flow of the precum with his tongue ... ohmygod!!! ... now that totally blows my mind! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mystymason
(Edit) (Jun 17, 2005)
- Thank you for your generous review. As to Dr. Phillips, I'm afraid Michael Dolin has not seen the last of her. As to hidden buttons, I seem to uncover my own as I write. Thanks again.
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duchifat
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May 24, 2005 |
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too crazy,isn`t?
i love the story becoming addictat to the princk.
waitig to hear how little Robert is trained by His Mom'and what become of Mitch,poor lucky guy..
i upgrade my rating to 10
Wellcome back.i love what She is doing to the kid.When are hisMom coming back?and what about the guy who was kidnaped from the lake.Did the train him prperly?
wowoooooooooooooooooo 10 10 10 10 10 (8/10)
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- Replied by:
mystymason
(Edit) (Jan 13, 2005)
- Maybe you just have to have faith. Many stranger things have happened, eh? Like cloning … antibiotics … space travel … electron microscopes … particle accelerators. It all depends on where society (or a determined group of individuals) directs its attention and resources. To biologically affix an improved version of a male organ to a woman’s hips and have her secretions be, um, addictive, is that really so extraordinary? Are you sure it isn’t happening already? Please continue reading. And, yes, thank you for your comments!
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moonbeam1999
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May 10, 2005 |
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Simply fantastic! Not only is your work incredibly imaginative, your skill with the mechanics of converting your thoughts into words is remarkable. Thank you for taking the time to share your talent with us.
On a more selfish note, I was enthralled with the chapter before last that dealt with the locking chastity device. Any more on that or the denial aspect would be greatly appreciated. Regardless, please continue.
Thanks again
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- Replied by:
mystymason
(Edit) (May 18, 2005)
- Dear moonbeam199:
Thank you very much for your generous comments. As to the Precluder (Chapter 14), I think you will read more about that. To paraphrase — “an orgasm is a terrible thing to waste.” And to be in COMPLETE control of someone else’s orgasm, and to not take advantage of such control, ... well, that would be a waste, too, don’t you think?
Please keep sharing your thoughts.
Mysty
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lex ludite
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Jan 29, 2005 |
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Innovative, disconcerting, well-written, thought provoking, all the elements this reader rarely finds in most things posted here. Brava! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mystymason
(Edit) (Feb 7, 2005)
- Dear Lex:
Thank you for your comments. There's much more to come and I hope you enjoy it.
Mysty
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ppants01
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Dec 30, 2004 |
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I got through Great story looking for more can't wait for the next chapter a must read thanks
P (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mystymason
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2004)
- Thanks for your comments. More chapters are on the way.
Mysty
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| Reviewer:
Frito
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Dec 20, 2004 |
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Not entirely my cup of tea, but a standard work in the genre of 'Princnesses.' That is to say Amazon-type women who rape men with huge thingees we always take care not to call a 'penis.'
Tooth removal, entirely too much snuff, not enough inside the mind of the men. No TG element at all.
All that being said, I download and print each one. They are of high quality and well worth a read. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
mystymason
(Edit) (Dec 20, 2004)
- You are my first reviewer and I sincerely thank you for your comments. Try to remember that this is only the very beginning of a potentially very long story and there will be many chapters yet to go. I hope you find them interesting. I, as an author, am certainly interested in readers' reactions, and they can definitely have an impact on how the story proceeds.
Mysty
Mysty
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