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The Fox Hunt
Author: Thomas Chaser
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(Added on Jan 15, 2005)
(This month 53771 readers) (Total 70620 readers) |
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A woman allows herself to be "the fox" in a timed fox hunt, but with a twist. If she is caught before time expires she can accept an additional challenge. If she wins, she gets money. If she loses, she gets nothing. Hunt/Capture and Crucifiction fans should enjoy this one. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
claire
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Aug 1, 2014 |
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My only complaint is that it is too short. I want to hear more about her time on the cross and how she is molested while there. I want to know if she makes it the full 4 hours. I wish the consequences of failure where something bad like becoming owned by the hunters for a period of time. Perhaps a year(or weak) for every hour she doesn't complete. Or maybe she would have to endure the cross everyday until she successfully completed her time and the required time could be increased every day. A dildo could be added to the cross and maybe it gets bigger everyday. Make her suffer! Well that is the way my sick mind goes. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 4, 2007 |
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nice start to the story, hope to see more (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
browndog
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Jan 24, 2005 |
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I felt it was only chapter 1 but look forward to the continued story (7/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jan 24, 2005)
- Yes, this is just the start to something longer I had planned. I'm actually in the process of a complete re-write with less pomp and circumstance and a more intimate arrangement. That version is still very much in development. Howerever, I may come back and finish this version just to see how the characters play out and to try and come up with an ending!
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Jan 23, 2005 |
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Wow, a hunt and a crucifixion, both in a 13k story! A good idea but needed a little fleshing out to make it more arousing.
Try to avoid cliches like "he stepped back to admire his handiwork". Some critics are liable to deduct a point for that. ;-) (7/10)
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