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Pizza Boy
Author: Kendra
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(Added on Feb 28, 2005)
(This month 49758 readers) (Total 62166 readers) |
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When his slave forgets the rules, punishment is swift. When she forgets the rules and burns the dinner, there is hell to pay. This Master is in a bad mood and torturing his slave is the perfect way to get rid of some sadistic anger. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (9/10) |
Average
Rating: (9.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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a nicely written story with lots of humiliation! i hope you will continue. i am interested to see how the pizza boy's training goes. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 2, 2005 |
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Outstanding! I would love to hear how the training of Donny to become a Dom goes. I will be to see if there is more to this story (10/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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excellent, outstnading, more please (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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Very hot, Extreme B&D D&s humiliation with an extra dash of masochism and sadism. If anything the story tries to cram to much action into a single chapter of what hopefully will be an ongoing tale. There are a few writing glitches and perhaps a skipped phrase her or there but they are easy to overlook as the reader is pulled along. It's difficult to write large tracks in the first person but the author does a great job. Very heavy but recommended (9/10)
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