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Helen
Author: Paladin
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(Added on Mar 4, 2005)
(This month 105551 readers) (Total 150106 readers) |
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A Black Police Officer Runs A Rich Woman And Her Family. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Mar 1, 2007 |
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Some of the sex scenes are OK but that's all. Spelling is beyond awful. Borders on illiterate sometimes. The story is not only unrealistic it's utterly ridiculous. The storyline is more like a parody but there's nothing funny.
Nobody misses the abducted women or Mark? Not the colleagues of the lawyers who knew where she was going? No friend or neighbor? Helen shoots around in Claudia's house in an affluent neighborhood. And nobody calls the cops?
The story is missing watersport, F/m, M/m, M+/m flags. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 7, 2005 |
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Great Story!! While it did take a while to read. The only suggestion I could make is maybe next time. give us 3 to 4 chapters at a time. I see were you could spin off a new story on how Bunny trained her new toy. (9/10)
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