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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 26, 2012 |
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This was the perfect story! To have a Dom dominated by a stronger Dom & turned into the submissive was just so erotic. Yet, having her former submissive girlfriend claimed by the stronger dom's friend just made this story incredibly hot! The only thing better would be to hear more about Karen/Katrina & Anneca/Jane. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mystymason
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Jun 5, 2005 |
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While I typically don't venture toward f/f stories, I was very interested in your work after reading your comments in the forums. This story you have written is very hot! Whether f/f or f/m or any other combination, you’ve painted the verbal picture of a young novitiate-to-be captured by the power of her own sexual swoon. She has transcended her ego and let her biology speak: “The thought of belonging to someone ... What on earth could be better than that?” Yes. What indeed? Please continue.
One final comment (and hope). If Karen should chose to allow a poor male to stumble under her influence and sexual amusement, well that would be quite nice, too.
Mysty
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| Reviewer:
Swan46
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Apr 27, 2005 |
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Good continuation from the first part. Concise character development feeds beautifully into the fantasy of haughty lesbian dom getting her comeuppance. Deliciously naughty! On another level it even has the built-in edge of punishing medical psychatrist. Nice tone. Nice pace. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
sunburststrat
(Edit) (Apr 28, 2005)
- Swan46,
Thanks so much for the review. I wasn't sure whether to continue the whole "Episode" approach. It's gratifying that the two worked together for you. I've written two more already (IV and V) but need to create Episode III to make them all play well together. Episode III will center around her practice as a psychiatrist and some serious problems that arise from that, as well as how she recovers from them. It will also be much longer with many more characters, some quite wicked.
sunburststrat
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sub_for_you
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Apr 14, 2005 |
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I can't get enough of these girl falls for girl stories. I wish I could have been the one Karen decides to take. I would just die! Karen sounds like such a dream, such a powerful woman, and so comfortable in her own skin.
Katrina was sassier in Episode I. I like her much better this way, after she understands and accepts her "true nature". She seems to have found herself. Katrina is the sweetest submissive. I am a little like her I think. That's partly why she appeals to me so much, plus she's not afraid to express her emotions. She's such a doll. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
sunburststrat
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2005)
- sub_for_you,
Thank you for the nice review. Yes I agree, Katrina is a doll (I like the way you put that!), a total sweetheart ... once she is shown the way. I'm so glad you liked her.
sunburststrat
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sunburststrat
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2005)
- **********
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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Good story. I would have like to see how the rest of the school year went. I think a little build up of the characters would have been good (7/10)
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- Replied by:
sunburststrat
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2005)
- La Toya,
Thanks for taking the time to read and review both episodes. You want character development? You got it, or at least will have it. Look for (more of) it in episode III, which I'm just starting. I'm just feeling my way around the many decisions a writer must make and the feedback really helps.
sunburststrat
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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Lesbian domination, role reversals, mind games, humiliation, spankings; all good things as far as this reader is concerned. There is a fair amount of heat generated, always a good thing to experience. The dialogue is a bit on the florid side, but not to the point as to be off-putting. The writing style is more than adequate, however the characters could do with more development. All in all a reasonably good effort and I look forward to seeing more of the author's work in the future. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
sunburststrat
(Edit) (Apr 13, 2005)
- Lex,
Thanks for the feedback. It is very much appreciated. Well, in terms of character development, I had wondered how much I could assume the reader brought forward from the previous episode, wherein Katrina and Jane were featured (although I imagine Episode One could be considered sketchy as well). At some level I was counting on a cumulative effect over the six episodes I have planned. But I did say they were stand alone stories.
I had quite a battle whether to do multiple episodes or one long 20+ chapter story, which sometimes appears to lose a lot of readers by the length, myself included. So many decisions!
- Replied by:
sunburststrat
(Edit) (Apr 14, 2005)
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