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The Contract
Author: Kijegam
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(Added on Apr 13, 2005)
(This month 74649 readers) (Total 107890 readers) |
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A young woman returns to her strange employment after a few days away. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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May 22, 2005 |
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The story flows like a gentle stream, not a raging torrent. It is erotic, without any early sex. All in all, a wonderful tease.
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Follow up - Creative and thoughtful. I liked the follow up to thought of the women in chains; all the other things that would need to be done in order to make that work for a long term.
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Apr 26, 2005 |
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Well-written, if a bit cliched. I personally like a bit more torture in stories, but this delivered what it promised. (8/10)
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longrover
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Apr 25, 2005 |
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Smoothly written with interesting characters and setting. Not much plot yet, but perhaps the young man's visit will introduce some tension. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 18, 2005 |
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A fine start, good details and interest piqued in more information. Hope to see additional chapters soon! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Winnie
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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Good start. Two questions, why for him, and why for her? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
bracemaiden
(Edit) (Apr 17, 2005)
- Why for him - viewing a few naked chained women all day must be a fun diversion whenever he wants it.
Why for her - money. The gig paid well.
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| Reviewer:
TzA
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Apr 15, 2005 |
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A very promising beginning, i hope for more parts (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 15, 2005 |
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Very good. I hope the Author explains how she came to/ why she sign the contract. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Apr 14, 2005 |
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A very good story maybe a prequal is in order to tell us how kristen cam about the contract. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ropebinder
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Apr 14, 2005 |
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Excellent beginning! Kijegam's writing flows well from start to finish. Especially enjoyable and erotic is the author's peek into the heroine's psychology. Most enjoyable!
My one complaint, which is common in most Internet fiction, is that the story ends before anything happens. It's as if she gets dressed up, but we don't read anything about the event. A pity. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 14, 2005 |
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keep it going (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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Great in any regard! A "10" rating is sure once the story becomes finished. :-) (9/10)
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rce
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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A good story with originality. I always enjoy stories involving chastity belts. (9/10)
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sassy_sweetie
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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Outstanding.... I am so wet.. fills sooo many fantasy ideas for me!!! cant wait for more!!! please continue.... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
kijegam
(Edit) (Apr 13, 2005)
- A pleasure. We obviously think alike! There is more on the way, but no idea where it is going. More a series of vignettes around a common theme at present.
K
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