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Omorashi Academy
Author: Gary Mendor
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(Added on Apr 23, 2005)
(This month 81359 readers) (Total 123512 readers) |
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Tales of a boarding school designed to break young women and turn them into twisted perverts. The signature technique used by the school to warp its victims is to force them to break their toilet-training - thus the school's nickname, from the Japanese word for 'bathroom accident'. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nassim
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May 4, 2011 |
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Oh yeah... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
nanasu1981
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May 26, 2005 |
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I don't usually like scat, but this one really tickled my fancy despite that. Embarassment and blushing can be so very ecchi and you used both to good effect. I watching and waiting for more on this story.
If you think that short chapters is easier, that is okay too. Just keep writing and posting. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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May 18, 2005 |
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Interesting beginning. Not very sexy, and there's something...missing, can't quite place my finger on it, but there's the core of something good here.
Good spelling and Grammar. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Dododecapod
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- Finally realised what I'd missed: smell. The girl should have been really stinking after her two "accidents", which wasn't touched on. Made it somewhat bland.
- Replied by:
konoko_itsuki
(Edit) (May 7, 2005)
- Excellent point on the smell. I'm working on the next installments now, and I plan to try to do a lot more - not only with the smell, but with descriptions in general. It occurs to me that I didn't give a very good description of the characters so far, a deficiency I plan to remedy in the next installment (and in the first one, if I ever get around to revising it :)
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Dododecapod
(Edit) (May 18, 2005)
- I'm impressed. Part two was a major improvement; much sexier, much richer in detail; I loved the lesbian seduction, and the light bondage. I've increased my rating to 7.
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| Reviewer:
collegechris25
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Apr 28, 2005 |
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I really liked it look foward to updates please make them longer (10/10)
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MasterRJ
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Apr 24, 2005 |
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This story should've been labled scat and you could've added a little something to your pilot chapters to give us some length. Other than that I like the world you've set up. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 24, 2005 |
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far to short. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
applered
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Apr 24, 2005 |
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great idea - hope we don't have to wait long for the next (longer?) chapter (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
elemental
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Apr 23, 2005 |
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I like the premise, and hope to see more. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Apr 23, 2005 |
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Too short... quite short, actually. You might want to consider posting more than one chapter at a time. And This has a lot of potential for ageplay and diapers, both of which are very good topics. (7/10)
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konoko_itsuki
(Edit) (May 7, 2005)
- Oh, believe me, there will be both ageplay and diapers. :) What there probably won't be is age-regression, because that would mean she'd feel it was /okay/ to have accidents... :)
I don't want to make any definite promises, but I hope to get another installment out within a week - or maybe longer, if I save up and post two or three at once.
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mkemse
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Apr 23, 2005 |
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ok but not real my genere (6/10)
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