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A Weekend With Natasha and Rachel
Author: fireball
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(Added on Jun 15, 2005)
(This month 153841 readers) (Total 262243 readers) |
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Humiliation, degradation, sexual abuse and slavery are the only things some women understand. So when two sluts are in need of some "behavior modification", a husband calls in the experts to teach them a lesson they'll never forget. |
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| Reviewer:
ijm
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Jul 16, 2007 |
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great story (10/10)
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azrlg17
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Nov 25, 2006 |
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OK, let me get this straight. He isn't payed in cash but with tracable transactions. The husband tells her that she should expect decorators and her rapists know that (they said it on the intercom). No other decorators ever came so it is reasonable to expect her husband to at least know the company he hired. From what he told her it is reasonable for her to believe her husband hired the thugs. So in case he failed with even one girl it would be pretty easy to be identified It's a big house that usually has gardeners, cooks,... and she isn't shy to have sex with them so she probably wouldn't send them away to fuck some decorators. All the rapists left lots of genetic material. And of course he makes movies of the stuff in case the police ever raids his home so that they have clear proof. And he puts some of the movies on the internet because everybody know that that can't be traced. And he tells people what he does. He says so himself in the last chapter.
Can someone explain to me why such a rank amateur hasn't been caught? I could understand if this were the memoirs of someone in jail. But he's supposed to be doing this for 10 years and never has been caught? And he takes some victims to be abused by about 50 of his friends. Not so smart because if they ever get arrested for something they can try to buy themselves free by offering him up to the authorities.
The author is a bit confused about the mechanics at least once i.e. there are some parts in the story that are not possible like when one girl's hands are tied behind her back and the she has to play with her breasts (and does).
I don't like the misogynist way the story is written.
And how did they know the great dane wouldn't attack them? That's a pretty insane risk to take. Where was the dog during the capture?
And of course two proud women are broken after 1 hour of torture. And of course begs to be let come after about 1 minute of orgasm denial. And naturally it takes only one evening for them to become dirty bondage cumsluts. And of course it only takes a weekend to completely reprogram someone. And of course they never try to escape or cry for help. And he does that all the time and has a 100% success rate because every girl is a natural slut and just needs to be shown by a superior man. In case you haven't noticed, I'm a wee bit sarcastic here but this story really piles on one cliche after another. And he says himself that the longest it took him was only 3 weeks. Some of the stories he tells are simply so over the top I simply can't take stuff like that serious. Tying up the CEO's wife in front of her friends? And no one of her FRIENDS helped her or called the cops? Renting out a girl at a garage sale? You know the type where old ladies come over? Who would call the cops even if they didn't suspect she was forced?
The story is missing a bestiality and incest code. (4/10)
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RhondaLee
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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Creative new ideas, creative story. (9/10)
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Oct 13, 2005 |
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Nice, hot and long. Wonderful. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 18, 2005 |
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very nice keep it going (9/10)
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qwert
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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Nice story, I enjoyed it very much. The plot is very similar to an idea I have carried around in my head for a long time, but have never gotten beyond putting one chapter onto paper. (7/10)
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Eden's Girl
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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Excellent piece, fireball. This is one of the best stories I've read on this site; certainly the best recently. Well-written, imaginative and stimulating. The only downfall of this story is perhaps where you list your top five celebrity lists. It sounds more like the author's voice than the narrator.
But I'm definitely going to be watching out for future chapters to this story / submissions.
Keep up the good work :) (9/10)
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Master_chris
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Jun 30, 2005 |
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great story, I can't wait for the next instorment of this story. will the sluts be trained to follow orders from the order of the house ??? (9/10)
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herkess
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Jun 17, 2005 |
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Enjoyed the energy and the point of view.
However I felt the action - the orgasms - were too wish fulfillment, too unrealistic to convince.
However an author I shall back to ....
(8/10)
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mike uk reader
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Jun 16, 2005 |
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Fireball-More like fire-cracker because that just about sums this story up. Now and again a pure gem of a story arrives onto the BDSM Library
site and this without doubt is one of them from a
great writer of erotic fantasy fiction.
Bags of humiliation,pain and suffering for these two dirty bitches and rest assured you will feel
totally involved in their debasedment.
Whether the story continues remains to be seen
I for one sincerely hope for more from this excellent author. I only put my remarks here from time to time when meritorious. (10/10)
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comelots
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Jun 16, 2005 |
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hi< i enjoyed it so much had to read it again. It has great description on the punishments that were carried out and the plot was excellent. Could imagine it happening in real life< but with the husband having to endure all the scenes from behind a 2way mirror, with him tied to a chair and restrained as well, so as to stop him from playing with himself, as i was while reading it. (9/10)
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anguisette
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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I totally disagree that 'nothing has happened' as the other reviewer stated. That 'nothing' has gotten me all hot and bothered! I'm so looking forward to the next installments! (9/10)
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oliveroflondon
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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After two chapters nothing has actually happened yet, but this is well written and has lots of promise. (9/10)
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