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A weekend at Masters
Author: slave_k
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(Added on Jul 17, 2005)
(This month 21256 readers) (Total 53834 readers) |
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Cindy meets her online Master for the first time and gets more than what she bargained for when 3 guests turn up..... |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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jrnd711
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Aug 31, 2012 |
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Despite the early high scores,you have been ripped by headhunters. A reviewer who destroys your total score primarily because they've had a bad day, or the dog wasn't around to kick. You can tell them by their bullshit grading logic. I enjoyed the story and obviously others did too. (10/10)
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dennisthmn
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Jan 14, 2007 |
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well written,don't be long in sending your next storey (10/10)
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bobby44
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Jan 14, 2007 |
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This writer has great potential. I prefer to develop the scene before jumping right into the hardcore BDSM. I would have enjoyed the story of how she was seduced from the internet and how she got to be naked on the floor with a leash in her mouth... (6/10)
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Lia
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Jul 9, 2006 |
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This was a well written story. Other than a few typos, the content was good and the delivery was also good. I recommend for a good read, and look forward to the next installment. (9/10)
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bigcat
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Jul 7, 2006 |
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I'm sorry so many reviewers here are so jaded that an intense, hot tale of extreme consensual humiliation and debasement could be found that wanting. Personally, I liked it -- a lot!!! A good, erotica story. Can't wait for more. Keep it up. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slave_k
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Jul 2, 2006 |
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Hi and thanks all for your comments. I have edited the first part and added a different second part but somehow the first and second part are still showing as more or less the same, hopefully will sort that soon.
slave_k (1/10)
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H Dean
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Jul 2, 2006 |
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First, I want to stress that the story was not bad, in the least. In fact, I rather liked it and I can see potential. My rating of a "3" is due, almost entirely, to the poor presentation. By that, I mean the poor word usage, incorrect word usage and the terrible punctuation. I understand, Slave K, that you do not want to write a story filled with short and choppy sentences. However, run-on sentences with a half dozen commas are just as halting to the reader. Again, I did enjoy the story. However, I had to re-read so much of the story that I was not able to immerse myself and enjoy it as I should have. (3/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jun 23, 2006 |
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Have you ever noticed how reviewers take their cue from the first review given?
Yes there are mistakes and a few misused words. I would recommend having a friend or Sig. Oth. proof read before you submit next time. If that’s a problem ask in the forums there are lots of folks willing to.
Originality, yes and no but how much original material is there really in this site. Overall I felt the story was good, worth reading and I hope you continue it.
(8/10)
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angelgirl
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Sep 12, 2005 |
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Hi slave k
I thought I would just try to balance out the unfair review by "heycarrieanne". Amyone who takes the time to write a story should be encouraged.
Love Angelgirl (10/10)
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Rocky
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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The best I can say is that the author did use quotation marks...incorrectly, unfortunately. Lame plot, even lamer dialogue. (3/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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Good grief!!! Learn the difference between you and your and if you are going to add an "S" on to the end of a word contracting the word "is" please remember to use an apostrophe. This story would have some potential if your grammar was decent. (3/10)
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rilawild
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Jul 20, 2005 |
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It may be hackned but it's still an OK story. Certainly not outstanding and the spelling isn't perfect ("new" rather than "knew" etc).
With a bit more work, perhaps some more characterisation regarding how the main characters met online and what drew Cindy into wanting to meet her online master, it would be improved. (5/10)
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lex ludite
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Jul 19, 2005 |
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Dominance and submission by the numbers,how very novel, NOT! Then there is the poor editing and a dependence on spell check that interferes with the flow of the story. Why devote your energy to produce something that could be better written using a computer program? This has been done to death, ad nauseam, and still this same old story keeps marching from the mind of author after author like one of those creatures from The Dawn of the Dead. (4/10)
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