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Janes Adventures in Self Bondage - The Tether
Author: jan311648
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(Added on Aug 2, 2005)
(This month 66818 readers) (Total 95387 readers) |
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'The appetite grows on what it feeds on' - or so it's said; and it certainly did with Jane. After the boredom and discomfort of her first adventure, she swore never to experience anything like it again. But the need for it slowly regrew, ans she saw ceratin possibilities in her dog.... |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Read C. Lakewood's comment and you've got exactly what I wanted to say.
JJ (10/10)
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fishmiester
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Sep 28, 2005 |
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Superb.
Please,please more (9/10)
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pangent617
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Aug 10, 2005 |
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I enjoy the loss of control to the animal and the humiliation aspect as she lost the battle with her bowel. If you are so inclined something similar not self inflicted and with more of the humiiation you wrote so well in this story (9/10)
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BigCat
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Aug 9, 2005 |
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Wow! That is some piece of writing. (10/10)
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Spitman
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Aug 6, 2005 |
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A fascinating adventure, enticingly original, and well written. A glimpse into a different erotic universe. (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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A tough decision, I want to give Towser a ten and kept hoping he might show even more initiative. Jane deserves at least a nine for her inventiveness. I'd give the both of them a 9.5 but that's not an option. Maybe if you teach Towser some new tricks? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jan311648
(Edit) (Aug 12, 2005)
- Early days yet for Towser, but he shall receive his reward - somewhat against Jane's will! As for her, her inventiveness is by no means exhausted, either in thinking of new tricks for her dog to learn, or more ingenious methods of putting her virtue in jeopardy!
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Dododecapod
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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This is very good. You writing is clean and clear, your explanations and exposition well worked inside the framework of the story, and your grammar and spelling flawless, and more importantly, it's a fun and sexy story.
I fiound the dog being trained to do everything he does in this story a little unbelievable, but then, you haven't set any time limits for his training, so it's not that severe. Altogether, a superb piece. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2009)
- The explanations and exposition ARE the framework of the story...
JJ
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C_Lakewood
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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WOW! Usually I debate with myself a bit over
exactly what rating to give a story. In this
case, there was never a scintilla of doubt; it
was a 10 all the way. There was a lot of
description of how Jane effected her self-
bondage. Usually I find that sort of stuff
quite tedious to wade through, but here it
was fascinating. An absorbing trip through
the mind of Jane...and of Towser. Some
stories are action-oriented (with little or
no insight into character or feelings) others
tend to be fairly static exercises in
psychology. This story combines both thought
and action to an admirable degree. Thank you,
jan. (10/10)
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