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Big Boy Author: pr_squared
(Added on Aug 2, 2005) (This month 62498 readers) (Total 81469 readers)
Zack, a tackle on the state football team, dreams of getting between Beth's shapely thighs. He gets more than he bargained. A ponyboy story

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: cambridge (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2005
A great ponyboy story! The only quibble is a continuity problem near the end between the hacking segment and the race. (9/10)
Replied by: pr_squared (Edit) (Aug 12, 2005)
THanks for your comment. I've tried to work in Ashley's return several ways. I struggled with graphic sex versus sexual tension.
pr_squared

Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2005
Speaking from the male perspective, this is one of the more depressing stories I've read in a very long time. On the other hand it is brilliantly written, a true horror story. My compliments to the author for producing such superb material. Unfortunately me thinks you are casting pearls before swine, not a good habit to get into when you display this kind of talent. (10/10)

Reviewer: bloodlineS (Edit) Rating: Aug 5, 2005
Sorry, but cuffs wouldn't work.. they'd just slip straight off .. (6/10)

Reviewer: rebelfan1 (Edit) Rating: Aug 4, 2005
Can tell you put a lot of effort into writing this....Nice job (9/10)

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