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Deadly Male Milkers
Author: TJ Ryder
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(Added on Sep 2, 2005)
(This month 58765 readers) (Total 78600 readers) |
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After months at sea, young sailor gets invited to a special party, only to find the luscious women are all a special form of vampire who live on sperm instead of blood! |
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| Reviewer:
Furious Angel
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Sep 6, 2005 |
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The plot of your story isn't my cup of tea as I usually prefer more M/f situations, however I found it to bbe very well written and an enjoyable new take on an old subject. I enjoy the reasoning for the changing of sperm to blood. My only real thing I can say in regads to Rufus. Reading how you wrote his accent almost made me lose the story. I understand you were trying to give him ethnic flair, but all you managed to do was inspire the old black and white cartoons or shows where white people did black face and made fun no 'negros'. There are ways to properly write the accent, perhaps take a look around.
Other than that I would look forward to reading more stuff, even though the subject isn't my thing, I always appreciate a well written story. (8/10)
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Ruby
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Sep 4, 2005 |
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What an interesting vampire tale. Too bad the lovelies have to kill their prey to enjoy their full life force. It's a combination of horror and femdom erotica that leaves the helpless victims with no chance of escape. (8/10)
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