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The Feeder
Author: OblongMilk
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(Added on Dec 12, 2005)
(This month 12552 readers) (Total 28311 readers) |
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A very successful, beautiful woman with a past endevours to make use of human toilets exclusively. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slaveatif
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Feb 27, 2010 |
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very nice story this is fantastic woman using men as her personal toilet
ofcourse men like to be under asses of females (10/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Dec 20, 2005 |
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Very impressive writing. The story was well laid out. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Dec 19, 2005 |
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Great writing, but I am going to wait for the next couple of chapters before raising my rating (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Dec 16, 2005 |
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Impressive writing. While I can live with watersports, scat I find somewhat disgusting, thus I didn't find this at all sexy, but I went into the story with my eyes open, and I'm glad I did.
Your command of the written word is excellent, and you have a good grasp of how to describe a person or place in a very few words. Your description of the protagonist at the beginning is erotic without going overboard on the descriptors, and I had a good idea of where everything was and a good idea of the "look" of things.
You editing was near-perfect, as well. I enjoyed reading this piece. (9/10)
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