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Hotel room D/s Author: Ecthelion
(Added on Jan 11, 2006) (This month 10833 readers) (Total 19421 readers)
A sub visits her Master in a hotel room

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: bracemaiden (Edit) Rating: Feb 8, 2006
Your sentence structure of "I (action) your (body part) was so monotonous as to distract me from reading. Mixing it up a bit, like common conversation is, will really help. (6/10)

Reviewer: PleasureSlave (Edit) Rating: Jan 28, 2006
Lovely sequence of events--would love to try it! Could use a bit more characterization on the part of the Dom. Delightful stuff! (8/10)

Reviewer: Breathless (Edit) Rating: Jan 18, 2006
I enjoyed this story immensely! Not a huge fan of the first person format, but your descriptions and various approaches were so hot that it was still a winner for me. By not having much in the way of any character development or descriptions, I was able to project myself into the "you" position.
Makes me want to meet the writer at this hotel.
(8/10)

Reviewer: C_Lakewood (Edit) Rating: Jan 16, 2006
If you want all mindless action, you'll probably
like this story. I didn't. Who are these
people? What are their thoughts? Motivations?
How did they come to this?
The writing was clean enough, but the effect was
very unsatisfying.
(5/10)

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