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Dr Bio
Author: stHell66
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(Added on Apr 6, 2006)
(This month 62828 readers) (Total 86870 readers) |
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The beginning of a psychotic doctor, and hie experiments |
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Average (?):  (3/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Dec 10, 2006 |
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Just to be different to everyone else ... well, I actually did get something from this story. My heart is still racing from it - not from the erotic nature, but from the fact that the jumble of images and thoughts and feelings is like that feeling of drinking too much coffee and then going jogging and then trying to jerk off afterwards and then realising that you can't because if you did then that would probably send you to sleep so instead you try to get your thoughts down on paper and make them make some sort of sense ... it's a crazy thing, sometimes, this literature thing - this story probably makes more sense than Finnegans Wake, and at least it only takes five minutes to read instead of six months. Oh well, if you like the things I like, then give this story a quick read, and then read it again to reassure yourself that you didn't just hallucinate the whole thing. (6/10)
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badcatholicgirl
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May 11, 2006 |
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still need help, but I lik the idea,pls work on it more (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Apr 20, 2006 |
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Ditto...start over and with some help. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 8, 2006 |
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Everyone else has stated the problems with this story (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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I sincerely hope that English is not your first language, because you have certainly butchered the heck out of it! Whatever you thought you have written here, it does not come through your bad grammar and awful spelling. (1/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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i agree with petleah, the story is simply bad, terrible, i gave up after the first few sentences (2/10)
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H Dean
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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Rather than elaborating, I will say "ditto" to Petleah's comments. (1/10)
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jip
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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Rather cruel, but erotic anyway. (5/10)
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petleah
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Apr 6, 2006 |
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Regardless of whether English is your first language, the lack of editing/proofreading is disgusting. An utter failure in the literature department which makes the plot of the text even worse than it is. (2/10)
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