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The Ambitious Race for Collecting Art
Author: THE Traveller
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(Added on Apr 25, 2006)
(This month 57545 readers) (Total 66925 readers) |
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My hommage to John Willie\'s work. A dastardly duo abduct women who are their rivals in collecting antiques. They subject them into strict and stimulating bondage. One of the abductee\'s lover tries to rescue her. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
EDMUNDOSLOTH
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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Hi Traveller.
I enjoyed this piece immensely. Great style for narration and simple, elegant plot taken from past illstrations. I lived it(as hero!)
(8/10)
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- Replied by:
THE Traveller
(Edit) (Apr 26, 2006)
- Edmundosloth, thank you for the comments. I'm happy to hear that you were able to identify with the protagonist while reading the story. Actually this is my first story to have a "hero" as the protagonist. At first this story was going to be told only in the third person narration, then I wanted to add another point of view ( that being the "hero"s ). I'm glad it worked.
Thanks,
Traveller
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 25, 2006 |
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i enjoyed the story based on what you wrote, but 1 issue i have is all the spacing in the story, there is so much pen space you could have made the story longer unless the spacing was done on purpose to longate the story (7/10)
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- Replied by:
THE Traveller
(Edit) (Apr 26, 2006)
- mkemse, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I don't know why the spacing in the story occured. It might have something to do with something I did while copying and pasting the story. It was not intentional.
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