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Sister
Author: Oralia Cruz
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(Added on Jun 21, 2006)
(This month 55308 readers) (Total 72104 readers) |
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A 16 year old goes to live with her older sister only to find she\'s intended for breeding |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JulieC
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Jun 29, 2006 |
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I like this story. It was hot, but at the same time I could see it happening in suburbia right now. (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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I normally do not like first-person stories, but you manage to carry this one off quite well. The girl's voice even sounds like someone her age. The only problem I found is that you left incest off your story codes. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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not bad but i bit short, which moredetailed had been written regarding her getting pregnant and carry the babay, th story just seemd to go to fast (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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Excellent story. Although the sexual experiences in itself are not unpleasant for her, the restraint of freedom and feeling as "a cow" (as said in the text) is probably her biggest problem. If there is one day a "part 2" suspect that Jack will be her saviour ??? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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This was very good, and the ending especially so. (8/10)
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